LOVE AND PUKE

[hesawacko]

LOVE AND PUKE

Warm and wet
I hear the splatter
But I'm too numb
For it to matter
Wetness spreads across my chest
Drips that haven't come to rest
I wipe your tears
I feel your slime I understand why you use slime, but I don't think it fits in with the tone. I think a different word that conveys the same thing would work better. 
For you
I'll be here every time

Plaintive eyes and burning head
Abandon thoughts of sleep and bed

No more wondering if you're sick
I hug you close
And feel us stick

thanks.  i think you're spot on, needs a different word.