Devolution

[rollingbrianjones]

Yeah my bad, was pretty (very) intoxicated when I commented last so no doubt was mixing up the versions as I to and fro'd from your piece and writing my comment- the edit, reading it only slightly drunk and in its entirety with no mixing up, is a definite improvement, kudos. It feels like a more appropriate summary, lyrically and largely also in terms of provoking thought, than your original ending. Not a fan of the loins of Adam bit though... brought on a natural cringe for whatever reason

RBJ