01-17-2017, 02:36 PM
Hmm. That's a good point but it really complicates S5 --
When we see the blow, we know
it is not for us. Our hands are pressed
together and our ears are filled
with dirt. We are not crows...
It's the singular blow that bugs me. Maybe "Blows fall, but we know/ they are not for us" ?
Pondering.
When we see the blow, we know
it is not for us. Our hands are pressed
together and our ears are filled
with dirt. We are not crows...
It's the singular blow that bugs me. Maybe "Blows fall, but we know/ they are not for us" ?
Pondering.
It could be worse