Interpretations
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(01-18-2017, 06:29 AM)Wjames Wrote:  
Thanks for your thoughts, everyone.

I agree with some of the points made, I think I might change carved to molded, and "the only ones" to "alone". I do like "the only ones", though, because it can mean something more than just alone, so I'm not sure.


I can appreciate that. You could still use "the only ones" in the context of a crowd—or any other context. 


I only say this to spark creative possibilities and not to push my previous suggestion. 
“Nature is a haunted house—but Art—is a house that tries to be haunted.” - Emily Dickinson
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Messages In This Thread
Interpretations - by Wjames - 01-03-2017, 06:41 AM
RE: Interpretations - by dukealien - 01-03-2017, 12:03 PM
RE: Interpretations - by Hkrodgers - 01-05-2017, 03:24 PM
RE: Interpretations - by Rogo - 01-06-2017, 11:57 AM
RE: Interpretations - by CRNDLSM - 01-09-2017, 04:29 AM
RE: Interpretations - by Mark Cecil - 01-11-2017, 08:33 AM
RE: Interpretations - by RiverNotch - 01-13-2017, 10:59 PM
RE: Interpretations - by Lizzie - 01-15-2017, 09:31 AM
RE: Interpretations - by Wjames - 01-18-2017, 06:29 AM
RE: Interpretations - by Rogo - 01-19-2017, 08:24 AM
RE: Interpretations - by Carrie Birdsong - 01-19-2017, 10:16 AM



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