01-19-2017, 08:24 AM 
	
	
	(01-18-2017, 06:29 AM)Wjames Wrote:
Thanks for your thoughts, everyone.
I agree with some of the points made, I think I might change carved to molded, and "the only ones" to "alone". I do like "the only ones", though, because it can mean something more than just alone, so I'm not sure.
I can appreciate that. You could still use "the only ones" in the context of a crowd—or any other context.
I only say this to spark creative possibilities and not to push my previous suggestion.
“Nature is a haunted house—but Art—is a house that tries to be haunted.” - Emily Dickinson
	

 

 
