Ocean prayers

[CRNDLSM]

I think the overlap is not intentional, I want to say the first three, or six, lines are interesting to think about, I like the imagery lots of movement, but I don't see levity revealed by anything here... unless it's so deep, I'm not showing the respect it's due? That would make 'our' moment make sense I guess?

"Towards the evening beach, I stopped for an intense amber halo
around the tallest house of the front, a bright fisherman's house.
The light separated the surrounding colors in the simplest pattern; 
the clarity and sense of these shades revealing the true levity 
of our moment. Nearby, men and women gathered in church
for the vespers."

Tear this one up!