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Autumn
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01-30-2017, 12:51 PM
I love the theme of your poem, you paint a great picture. I do agree that the 'cupboard, covered rhyming scheme doesn't really work. Some of the rhyming sounds a bit forced too, like the "You know this is no show, that soon there will be snow" line as an example. Other than that, I think with some practice you will be just fine.
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Autumn - by Wonderfullife - 01-28-2017, 09:37 PM
RE: Autumn - by ellajam - 01-28-2017, 10:44 PM
RE: Autumn - by tommyb - 03-14-2017, 05:05 AM
RE: Autumn - by Scribner1 - 01-29-2017, 04:40 AM
RE: Autumn - by Wonderfullife - 01-30-2017, 03:10 AM
RE: Autumn - by kylede87 - 01-30-2017, 12:51 PM
RE: Autumn - by bestoweroflight - 01-31-2017, 07:22 AM
RE: Autumn - by Wonderfullife - 02-01-2017, 03:59 AM
RE: Autumn - by JaredEggo - 02-05-2017, 12:12 PM
RE: Autumn - by Wonderfullife - 02-05-2017, 09:32 PM
RE: Autumn - by Lizzie - 02-13-2017, 04:08 AM
RE: Autumn - by AttnAttack - 03-13-2017, 02:53 PM
RE: Autumn - by Richard - 03-26-2017, 07:50 AM
RE: Autumn - by Elizazile - 03-28-2017, 01:09 PM
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