Autumn

[bestoweroflight]

This is a beautiful first foray into painting a picture in our imaginations with words. Some advice i could give you is that as you write the lines, dont assume your poetry needs to rhyme in order for it to flow naturally. I don't blame you for this to be honest, I remember at primary school when they taught poetry, they always just get kids to start creating rhymes. From my own experiences in writing poetry, I think its best to first see if rhyming in necessary to the theme of the poem, and then use a database for rhyming words such as rhymezone.com to find words that rhyme with the core lines of your poem. I found myself to think more creatively when i had an exhaustive list of words to select from that rhyme with the previous words. But all in all, I think its a great start and I for one look forward to seeing you hone your skills as a poet with experience.


Ya Hagh

Bestoweroflight