For Mae

For Mae

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02-19-2017, 06:58 AM

(02-19-2017, 04:28 AM)Lizzie Wrote: Thanks for the read and the input guys.

canofworms: yes, that's why she's there. I doubt very much that the poem would suffer if I eliminated those two lines, which I may very well do.

Caleb: I'll take another look at that third stanza and see what I can do about the flow. Thanks for giving it a look.

That may just be me.

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For Mae - by Lizzie - 12-20-2016, 08:42 AM

RE: For Mae - by Achebe - 12-23-2016, 11:30 AM

RE: For Mae - by Lizzie - 12-24-2016, 11:58 AM

RE: For Mae - by Erthona - 12-29-2016, 03:43 AM

RE: For Mae - by Lizzie - 12-30-2016, 06:54 AM

RE: For Mae - by Erthona - 12-31-2016, 11:37 AM

RE: For Mae - by Lizzie - 01-19-2017, 06:21 AM

RE: For Mae - by mrweiner - 01-24-2017, 02:21 PM

RE: For Mae - by Lizzie - 01-25-2017, 03:34 AM

RE: For Mae - by canofworms - 02-18-2017, 02:02 PM

RE: For Mae - by Caleb Murdock - 02-18-2017, 03:58 PM

RE: For Mae - by Lizzie - 02-19-2017, 04:28 AM

RE: For Mae - by canofworms - 02-19-2017, 06:58 AM

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