-since day one
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I added a little more story... Thanks for bearing with my heartbreak - I'm concerned it's a little cliche.

Since Day One

It started with you,
This year...
Guiding me through the crowds of people,
Your hand on my back.

This year,
Won't end with you.

Your hand on my back.
Guiding me,
"I will not give up on you."
As I slowly lit the fuse 
To ignite my heart.

I ended you,
And me, 

Us. 
Like the fireworks,
Just a temporary show.
Red and green and gold...
And then only blackness.

We've been sitting on dynamite. 



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Hey everyone,
Be gentle with me; it's my first ever post and poem. 
Looking forward to working with you all! Thanks for reading Smile

It started with you,
This year...
This year,
Won't end with you.

I ended you,
and me. 

Us,
As the fireworks,
Just a show.
Red and green and gold...
And then only blackness.

We've been sitting on dynamite,

-since day one
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Messages In This Thread
-since day one - by litQueen - 02-27-2017, 12:36 AM
RE: -since day one - by Weeded - 02-27-2017, 01:29 AM
RE: -since day one - by Todd - 02-27-2017, 01:29 AM
RE: -since day one - by Flos Campi - 02-27-2017, 05:03 AM
RE: -since day one - by muteyy - 02-27-2017, 06:17 AM
RE: -since day one - by litQueen - 02-27-2017, 11:15 AM
RE: -since day one - by Todd - 02-27-2017, 04:26 PM
RE: -since day one - by Achebe - 02-28-2017, 06:58 AM
RE: -since day one - by Flos Campi - 03-01-2017, 01:45 PM
RE: -since day one - by benyamind - 03-03-2017, 11:53 PM



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