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spring haiku, quantity 1, date: 2017-03-22

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03-24-2017, 03:00 PM

(03-23-2017, 03:29 PM)Lizzie Wrote: What about a specific flower instead of the general noun?

Otherwise, I love.

done
(changed "flowers" to "azaleas" which, being a spring kigo and all, makes it even more like a haiku)
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a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions

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spring haiku, quantity 1, date: 2017-03-22 - by rayheinrich - 03-23-2017, 02:50 PM

RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by Lizzie - 03-23-2017, 03:29 PM

RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by rayheinrich - 03-24-2017, 03:00 PM

RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by burrealist - 03-28-2017, 03:37 AM

RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by rayheinrich - 03-29-2017, 04:34 PM

RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by burrealist - 03-30-2017, 03:48 AM

RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by rayheinrich - 03-30-2017, 10:50 AM

RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by amaril - 03-30-2017, 12:39 PM

RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by rayheinrich - 03-30-2017, 02:47 PM

RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by Lizzie - 03-30-2017, 02:49 PM

RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by rayheinrich - 03-30-2017, 02:59 PM

RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by Lizzie - 03-31-2017, 05:12 PM

RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by burrealist - 03-31-2017, 01:11 AM

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