spring haiku, quantity 1, date: 2017-03-22
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(03-28-2017, 03:37 AM)burrealist Wrote:  
(03-23-2017, 02:50 PM)rayheinrich Wrote:  
        azaleas
        new (What if you used a less colloquial word?)
        again


One word each line- nice.

The tension in the poem is created by the paradox of something being new more than once.
That's not possible, yet spring manages to pull off this miracle every year.
So... with that in mind, come up with another word that fits and I'll use it.
(Except for 'neoteric', no way I'll use that one.) Smile
                                                                                                                a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions
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RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by Lizzie - 03-23-2017, 03:29 PM
RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by rayheinrich - 03-24-2017, 03:00 PM
RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by burrealist - 03-28-2017, 03:37 AM
RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by rayheinrich - 03-29-2017, 04:34 PM
RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by burrealist - 03-30-2017, 03:48 AM
RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by rayheinrich - 03-30-2017, 10:50 AM
RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by amaril - 03-30-2017, 12:39 PM
RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by rayheinrich - 03-30-2017, 02:47 PM
RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by Lizzie - 03-30-2017, 02:49 PM
RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by rayheinrich - 03-30-2017, 02:59 PM
RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by Lizzie - 03-31-2017, 05:12 PM
RE: spring haiku #2017-03-22 - by burrealist - 03-31-2017, 01:11 AM



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