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	(03-28-2017, 03:37 AM)burrealist Wrote:(03-23-2017, 02:50 PM)rayheinrich Wrote:One word each line- nice.
azaleas
new (What if you used a less colloquial word?)
again
The tension in the poem is created by the paradox of something being new more than once.
That's not possible, yet spring manages to pull off this miracle every year.
So... with that in mind, come up with another word that fits and I'll use it.
(Except for 'neoteric', no way I'll use that one.)
 
	
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