spring haiku, quantity 1, date: 2017-03-22

[burrealist]

tbh this is a bad poem

It actually isn't. Something profoundly simple can go right over the head of an oblivious person. As the word "new" seemed colloquial to me, the tension wasn't obvious because I didn't delve into the meaning.

"This is a bad poem" was a bad critique. Actually, it wasn't a critique, it was an opinion.

Please refrain from critiquing the other critics within a poem thread.  If you wish to make comments outside the parameters of your own critique of the poem, you may take it to the sewer or the arse.  Thank you for your cooperation.  --Quix/mod