04-01-2017, 06:37 AM
(02-17-2016, 03:04 PM)Achebe Wrote: When a song must be sung
it shall ring from the rooftops Or "will" ?
drummed by the hoof drops
of rising rain. This was impressive to me. Drumming liquid off a surface- nice imagery, and I also like the reversal from rain falling.
Though money's for the taking
on deals in the making
your lips will be quaking
from words unsaid. I think of thunder right here.