04-02-2017, 09:39 PM
An interesting read, Brownlie. This image keeps flickering in my mind:
"The sunset, like an unsteady orange hastily scribbled from a sloppy hand,
The afterimage of the sun contributes to the tearful ode.
“Carry me o west wind. God must be the Brundle Fly.” "
The title as headline works well for this, vivid, thanks for the read.
"The sunset, like an unsteady orange hastily scribbled from a sloppy hand,
The afterimage of the sun contributes to the tearful ode.
“Carry me o west wind. God must be the Brundle Fly.” "
The title as headline works well for this, vivid, thanks for the read.
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