Beetle Wife

[rymrkbstll]

The imagery in here is rich. The connection between the two subjects and the message was delivered successfully. The only downside for me is that beetle's are just too random to be compared. It's not that it's wrong but it's just kinda strange to compare it to a beetle. It's like comparing one's own existence to a motherboard, or a loved one to an item's bar code. True it is that domestic violence against women are such a brutal act, like a boy smashing a bug. Hoping that domestic violence be gone and will never be made a poem about in the future again.