Storm Magic

[nibbed]

Hi!
Wow, this is your first poem here!
Inspiration can come in just a moment, can't it?



Flair bolt fly fling                                                              ~seems these intros into the stanzas should be similar, but this one is a list of sorts
       The Lord of the Skye commands                             ~this is a place and so I am placed in two thoughts "sky" and "Skye"
       Thy strings of electric to scream over
       The Mortal coiled, skin-bound ones                           ~why capitalize Mortal?
Illuminate and set to awe
       The thralls of ground and water
       Who grovel and flee helpless to the
       Wickedly terrorizing displays above                           ~very descriptive verse
Life unused to brazen bright skies                                     ~unused as in "not used" to or "made un-useful"?
       Flashes soaring through ozone
       Rich and blue be you in former
       Light streak, white arc bleached                                 ~good description
Strobe the ground with rippling
       Scrawls drawling of heat                                              ~ my favorite line here
       And scar, pulling drawing on fright
       You tendril of mighty script                                          ~very cool
An out-pouring of storm magic on world below                   ~not sure about outpouring, but I understand the magnitude of thought




although magic isn't one of my favorite words,
I understand how the reader is encouraged
through the authors words of imagination to describe
a spectacular event.

Welcome here. I hope you fun and enjoy this
place as much as I have.  janine