misplaced summer Day in May for Ray (edit)
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lilacs burst
earthworms rise —
an early shower

(Thanks for all the help and fun with this, pigpen.)

an early shower
obliges an earthworm to rise
a lilac to burst.

early showers
lure earthworms
lilacs burst

early showers
tempt earthworms
lilacs burst
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misplaced summer Day in May for Ray (edit) - by ellajam - 05-20-2017, 07:08 PM
RE: misplaced summer Day in May for Ray (edit) - by just mercedes - 05-25-2017, 03:58 PM



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