05-24-2017, 01:08 AM
(05-24-2017, 12:09 AM)LunaDeLore Wrote:Thanks, Luna. Now I'm wavering between early showers lure earthworms and early shower lures earthworms but either way I'm not sure I like the double er sound of lure and earth. Glad it's headed in the right direction, though. Thanks for letting me know.(05-20-2017, 07:08 PM)ellajam Wrote: early showers
lure earthworms
lilacs burst
ellajam,
isn't it beautiful when one word changes so much and so little. the showers lure the earthworms to the surface of the soil, the sun captures them....thinking on that tempt was kinda boring.
good work.
Luna
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