misplaced summer Day in May for Ray (edit)
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(05-24-2017, 01:11 AM)Achebe Wrote:  lure....lilac....sounds like a tongue twister

early showers
lure earthworms
lilacs burst
linnets malinger liltingly
tralalala sunday
Wow dare you imply I'm over-alliterating? Me? Never. Big Grin And I am in a tralala mood lately, if I can't squeeze some joy out of spring I may as well head over to the suicide thread.

So, not a fan of lure? Because of the L's, not the er-er sound? hmm, I'll think on it. Thanks for coming back.
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RE: misplaced summer Day in May for Ray (edit) - by ellajam - 05-24-2017, 01:27 AM
RE: misplaced summer Day in May for Ray (edit) - by just mercedes - 05-25-2017, 03:58 PM



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