05-24-2017, 03:31 AM
(05-24-2017, 03:26 AM)Lizzie Wrote:Agreed, er, er ... back to the drawing board. Thanks for the response.(05-24-2017, 03:13 AM)ellajam Wrote:I like lure for meaning (earthworms coming to the surface to be plucked from the ground for fishing and put on lures), but I don't like it for sonics. I don't like how lure leads into earthworms -- it is a little bit of R overkill....(05-24-2017, 02:56 AM)Lizzie Wrote: undefinedYup, a big So What. What about lure vs tempt? Still mortally wounded?
Yup. Dead.I'm on the fence.
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