05-27-2017, 05:55 PM
Hi, Brownlie, interesting meter going on. 
I especially like "the semen swirling in the shower" and "the world's cheating on you while you hump it", ain't that the truth. 
Nice write.
I especially like "the semen swirling in the shower" and "the world's cheating on you while you hump it", ain't that the truth. Nice write.
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