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Something about you
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06-02-2017, 07:41 AM
Thanks, Lizzie. A longer poem would detract from the lyrical quality that I was at least aiming for. It needs to be amenable to being read aloud in one breath.
But I get what you mean - there's avagueness after the first two lines that is less than satisfying...
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe
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Something about you - by Achebe - 06-02-2017, 07:21 AM
RE: Something about you - by Lizzie - 06-02-2017, 07:34 AM
RE: Something about you - by Achebe - 06-02-2017, 07:41 AM
RE: Something about you - by vagabond - 06-02-2017, 09:00 AM
RE: Something about you - by ellajam - 06-02-2017, 09:20 AM
RE: Something about you - by Achebe - 06-03-2017, 11:09 AM
RE: Something about you - by ellajam - 06-03-2017, 06:46 PM
RE: Something about you - by Achebe - 06-04-2017, 08:43 PM
RE: Something about you - by Richard - 06-25-2017, 05:04 AM
RE: Something about you - by CNL - 06-25-2017, 07:22 AM
RE: Something about you - by Achebe - 06-30-2017, 06:03 AM
RE: Something about you - by Keith - 07-01-2017, 09:58 PM
RE: Something about you - by Thunderembargo - 07-13-2017, 03:10 AM
RE: Something about you - by ellajam - 07-13-2017, 04:01 AM
RE: Something about you - by crow - 07-16-2017, 12:45 PM
RE: Something about you - by Achebe - 07-17-2017, 01:47 AM
Surer than sense - by Achebe - 08-16-2017, 12:31 AM
RE: Something about you - by multumnonmulta - 07-20-2017, 02:29 PM
RE: Something about you - by Achebe - 07-21-2017, 08:16 AM
RE: Something about you - by crow - 08-03-2017, 01:28 PM
RE: Something about you - by Achebe - 08-03-2017, 03:02 PM
RE: Something about you - by nibbed - 08-04-2017, 12:56 AM
RE: Something about you - by Lydish - 08-04-2017, 03:15 AM
RE: Something about you - by Achebe - 08-07-2017, 02:52 AM
RE: Something about you - by nibbed - 08-07-2017, 06:09 AM
RE: Something about you - by Knot - 10-06-2017, 01:17 AM
RE: Something about you - by Achebe - 10-06-2017, 07:17 AM
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