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Water and Sky (Thread Closed)
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06-06-2017, 04:42 AM
I'm having an issue with the title, and feel it would be more consistent calling it "Ocean and Sky" or "Water and Air." I like the concept and what you're trying to convey with the imagery but agree with the others on the wordiness. Much of the wording can be chopped to bare essentials and pack a harder punch as a result. I look forward to seeing the rewrite.
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Water and Sky (Thread Closed) - by mv5543 - 12-12-2016, 06:00 AM
RE: Water and Sky - by Alexis Of Wonderland - 12-13-2016, 11:41 AM
RE: Water and Sky - by Wjames - 12-13-2016, 02:56 PM
RE: Water and Sky - by Merrikay - 12-13-2016, 03:50 PM
RE: Water and Sky - by hesawacko - 12-14-2016, 03:48 AM
RE: Water and Sky - by rowens - 12-14-2016, 02:53 PM
RE: Water and Sky - by AsianPotato - 02-07-2017, 07:03 PM
RE: Water and Sky - by C.los - 04-24-2017, 10:15 AM
RE: Water and Sky - by keeper - 04-26-2017, 07:45 AM
RE: Water and Sky - by wordgobbler - 04-26-2017, 12:40 PM
RE: Water and Sky - by eharrison - 05-26-2017, 03:37 PM
RE: Water and Sky - by Vonstevenstien - 05-27-2017, 12:48 PM
RE: Water and Sky - by Jana - 06-06-2017, 04:42 AM
RE: Water and Sky - by Ivoryirwin - 06-10-2017, 08:18 AM
RE: Water and Sky - by AmiL0wHi - 06-17-2017, 02:45 AM
RE: Water and Sky - by Keith - 06-17-2017, 04:50 AM
RE: Water and Sky - by Chorus - 06-21-2017, 11:47 AM
RE: Water and Sky - by mirovia - 07-05-2017, 10:37 AM
RE: Water and Sky - by Radetof.Yahska - 07-05-2017, 08:59 PM
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