zeros, ones & the inbetweens

zeros, ones & the inbetweens

TrashPanda333
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06-23-2017, 02:51 PM

I honestly loved your poem. The math them connecting it to life looking at other from a different perspective was great. But for me it didn't really flow. It was kinda choppy and didn't flow off the tonight ya know. I feel like it needs more or a rythem

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zeros, ones & the inbetweens - by benyamind - 03-15-2017, 07:28 AM

RE: zeros, ones & the inbetweens - by ellajam - 03-16-2017, 07:16 AM

RE: zeros, ones & the inbetweens - by CRNDLSM - 03-16-2017, 10:09 AM

RE: zeros, ones & the inbetweens - by Elizazile - 03-20-2017, 03:29 AM

RE: zeros, ones & the inbetweens - by egr - 03-23-2017, 01:29 PM

RE: zeros, ones & the inbetweens - by Graca - 03-26-2017, 12:01 AM

RE: zeros, ones & the inbetweens - by Richard - 04-01-2017, 12:11 PM

RE: zeros, ones & the inbetweens - by Szczepan - 05-04-2017, 02:15 PM

RE: zeros, ones & the inbetweens - by benyamind - 06-23-2017, 03:38 AM

RE: zeros, ones & the inbetweens - by TrashPanda333 - 06-23-2017, 02:51 PM

RE: zeros, ones & the inbetweens - by JKBetts - 06-24-2017, 11:38 AM

RE: zeros, ones & the inbetweens - by typing mantis - 07-02-2017, 07:54 PM

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