06-30-2017, 06:03 AM
Thanks, Richard and CNL.
The speaker's thoughts, not the bus, are ambling through a fog bound city that he's left behind while the bus drives past suburban gardens. Judging from your responses, that wasn't sufficiently clear and I have added a comma after 'bramble' to sort that one out.
The speaker's thoughts, not the bus, are ambling through a fog bound city that he's left behind while the bus drives past suburban gardens. Judging from your responses, that wasn't sufficiently clear and I have added a comma after 'bramble' to sort that one out.
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe