07-04-2017, 12:19 PM 
	
	
	
		thank you four-eyed cat for your comments to my poem.
I was thinking about removing some of the punctuation
but wasn't sure. It is certainly something to consider.
Have a wonderful evening.
nibbed
	
	
I was thinking about removing some of the punctuation
but wasn't sure. It is certainly something to consider.
Have a wonderful evening.
nibbed
there's always a better reason to love
	

 

 
