ellipsis
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(07-03-2017, 02:33 AM)nibbed Wrote:  . . .


Moments require a pause
and clues will float into space,

but please
remember to leave
the proper number of marks:

ellipsis.

a good thought shaped into a poem.
I´d omitt the last line and make "ellipsis" the title (mysterious enough for me, had to look the word up).
maybe also write "place" instead of "leave"   (just my obsession with rhymes)
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Messages In This Thread
ellipsis - by nibbed - 07-03-2017, 02:33 AM
RE: . . . - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 07-03-2017, 02:41 AM
RE: . . . - by nibbed - 07-04-2017, 12:19 PM
RE: . . . - by vagabond - 07-05-2017, 12:59 AM
RE: . . . - by nibbed - 07-14-2017, 06:30 AM
RE: ellipsis - by Tiger the Lion - 07-14-2017, 01:16 PM
RE: ellipsis - by nibbed - 07-14-2017, 09:27 PM
RE: ellipsis - by RiverNotch - 07-15-2017, 10:32 PM
RE: ellipsis - by nibbed - 07-17-2017, 12:37 PM
RE: ellipsis - by Achebe - 07-17-2017, 08:06 PM
RE: ellipsis - by nibbed - 07-18-2017, 11:12 AM
RE: ellipsis - by just mercedes - 07-19-2017, 09:29 AM
RE: ellipsis - by nibbed - 07-19-2017, 10:46 AM
RE: ellipsis - by just mercedes - 07-19-2017, 10:59 AM
RE: ellipsis - by nibbed - 07-19-2017, 11:03 AM



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