Water and Sky (Thread Closed)

[mirovia]

Once I stood on the top of a tide. 
Since I was so high, it seemed fine to shut my eyes.

As I reached out my hand to touch the sky.  
Air slipped through my fingers, and I opened my eyes.

I glanced below and saw no tide.            No comma between below and tide, it's unnecessary 
I was cornered by shallow water on each side

From now on, I will not shut my eyes
As I look for deep waters, unknowing where they lie No comma between waters and but