07-15-2017, 10:32 PM
would consider eliminating the title altogether, since it gives the game away for me.
also, jumping off of tiger's suggestion, just remove the fifth: "but please remember / to mark". the ellipsis at the end already says "appropriately", "the proper number of", etc, and leaving it as I suggested may emphasize the many meanings.
also, jumping off of tiger's suggestion, just remove the fifth: "but please remember / to mark". the ellipsis at the end already says "appropriately", "the proper number of", etc, and leaving it as I suggested may emphasize the many meanings.