07-17-2017, 12:37 PM 
	
	
	(07-15-2017, 10:32 PM)RiverNotch Wrote: would consider eliminating the title altogether, since it gives the game away for me.
also, jumping off of tiger's suggestion, just remove the fifth: "but please remember / to mark". the ellipsis at the end already says "appropriately", "the proper number of", etc, and leaving it as I suggested may emphasize the many meanings.
Thanks, RiverNotch.
I was actually considering
changing it back to the original.
It's more me, like how I would have spoken it.
Thank you for your kind & thoughtful consideration of my poem.
nibbed
there's always a better reason to love
	

 

 
