ellipsis

[Achebe]

ellipsis


Moments require a pause
and clues will float into space, ... consider deleting 'and', 'will' and ending with a full stop

but please.....not needed, I think 
remember to place
the proper number of marks

. . .







ORIGINAL

. . .


Moments require a pause
and clues will float into space,

but please
remember to leave
the proper number of marks:

ellipsis.

Not sure what the poem is trying to say, but there's room to trim methinks