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08-03-2017, 03:02 PM

(08-03-2017, 01:28 PM)crow Wrote: Achebe—you're kidding, right?

Imagined person-->roses-->blown; came-->boredom leading to daydream-->hidden places (backyard, bramble, intensely fogged-up town)-->dirtiness-->secretiveness (something about it)-->garden reference, with all that entails + came + imagination (to mind).

How is it *not* about masturbation???

You're right. Everything is about masturbation. My bad.

~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe

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Something about you - by Achebe - 06-02-2017, 07:21 AM

RE: Something about you - by Lizzie - 06-02-2017, 07:34 AM

RE: Something about you - by Achebe - 06-02-2017, 07:41 AM

RE: Something about you - by vagabond - 06-02-2017, 09:00 AM

RE: Something about you - by ellajam - 06-02-2017, 09:20 AM

RE: Something about you - by Achebe - 06-03-2017, 11:09 AM

RE: Something about you - by ellajam - 06-03-2017, 06:46 PM

RE: Something about you - by Achebe - 06-04-2017, 08:43 PM

RE: Something about you - by Richard - 06-25-2017, 05:04 AM

RE: Something about you - by CNL - 06-25-2017, 07:22 AM

RE: Something about you - by Achebe - 06-30-2017, 06:03 AM

RE: Something about you - by Keith - 07-01-2017, 09:58 PM

RE: Something about you - by Thunderembargo - 07-13-2017, 03:10 AM

RE: Something about you - by ellajam - 07-13-2017, 04:01 AM

RE: Something about you - by crow - 07-16-2017, 12:45 PM

RE: Something about you - by Achebe - 07-17-2017, 01:47 AM

Surer than sense - by Achebe - 08-16-2017, 12:31 AM

RE: Something about you - by multumnonmulta - 07-20-2017, 02:29 PM

RE: Something about you - by Achebe - 07-21-2017, 08:16 AM

RE: Something about you - by crow - 08-03-2017, 01:28 PM

RE: Something about you - by Achebe - 08-03-2017, 03:02 PM

RE: Something about you - by nibbed - 08-04-2017, 12:56 AM

RE: Something about you - by Lydish - 08-04-2017, 03:15 AM

RE: Something about you - by Achebe - 08-07-2017, 02:52 AM

RE: Something about you - by nibbed - 08-07-2017, 06:09 AM

RE: Something about you - by Knot - 10-06-2017, 01:17 AM

RE: Something about you - by Achebe - 10-06-2017, 07:17 AM

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