Beautiful
#12
I think one bit of advice would be to change the title to "You are beautiful because..." then continue your poem without that line prefacing each description.
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Beautiful - by bernie99 - 05-27-2017, 05:44 PM
RE: Beautiful - by just mercedes - 05-27-2017, 06:05 PM
RE: Beautiful - by tectak - 05-28-2017, 04:23 AM
RE: Beautiful - by Leanne - 05-28-2017, 04:46 AM
RE: Beautiful - by Vonstevenstien - 05-28-2017, 11:57 PM
RE: Beautiful - by Raspberry Lemonade - 07-19-2017, 12:39 PM
RE: Beautiful - by Ja wangana - 08-03-2017, 06:51 PM
RE: Beautiful - by nibbed - 08-04-2017, 10:31 PM
RE: Beautiful - by Ecesis - 08-08-2017, 04:47 PM
RE: Beautiful - by billy - 08-08-2017, 05:02 PM
RE: Beautiful - by BeauRessa - 08-09-2017, 01:20 PM
RE: Beautiful - by FledglingTroubadour - 08-15-2017, 05:50 PM
RE: Beautiful - by bob@mancity.net - 10-14-2023, 06:40 AM
RE: Beautiful - by Shahzareth - 09-01-2024, 07:45 PM
RE: Beautiful - by Gerryswo - 11-28-2024, 08:51 AM
RE: Beautiful - by ton321 - 12-07-2024, 12:40 PM



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