Gingerly - Edit 1

[Wjames]

Edit 1:

The moon is a slaughterhouse
dripping red into your ponytail
and my eyes. 

I wish you would let your hair down
like it were me. I'm always wishing 
you would let me go

down.

Original:

The moon is full
of slaughterhouses
dripping red into your ponytail
and my eyes.

I wish you would let your hair down
like it were me. I'm always wishing 
you would let me go

down.