09-12-2017, 12:12 AM
You picked such a fertile setting. So much could be done. Why didn't you dig below the surface?
You tell me what she did, but not why she did it or how it effected her. Why did she pick that can? Who else was in the store and why? Was this a task she liked or hated? I couldn't tell. I wanted a relateable scene, not just a fact sheet. I guess it left me wanting for more ambitious paint.
You tell me what she did, but not why she did it or how it effected her. Why did she pick that can? Who else was in the store and why? Was this a task she liked or hated? I couldn't tell. I wanted a relateable scene, not just a fact sheet. I guess it left me wanting for more ambitious paint.