10-13-2017, 09:20 AM
I liked the poem
I don't know if im good at judging peoples poetry
but i feel like the ending was kind of weird
I know poems don't have to make sense but if she already left you why are you two
still breathing together i got the impression that she left you already and all you have left
is the picture of you and her on the dresser so i was a little confused on that part but maybe i jst
didnt understand it correctly but other then that it was great
i love these kind of poems
I don't know if im good at judging peoples poetry
but i feel like the ending was kind of weird
I know poems don't have to make sense but if she already left you why are you two
still breathing together i got the impression that she left you already and all you have left
is the picture of you and her on the dresser so i was a little confused on that part but maybe i jst
didnt understand it correctly but other then that it was great
i love these kind of poems