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j4austin
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10-19-2017, 06:22 AM

congrats...these are my first poems read on this forum......
it is a cluster of poems....right?

anyway...the childishness is light and appreciated....
I would have found it 'funner' it the meter was more
symmetrical

J4

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Knock, knock. - by Yjack123 - 09-16-2017, 11:10 AM

RE: Knock, knock. - by Richard - 09-18-2017, 12:00 PM

RE: Knock, knock. - by j4austin - 10-19-2017, 06:22 AM

RE: Knock, knock. - by naeshelle - 10-23-2017, 05:37 PM

RE: Knock, knock. - by 71degrees - 10-25-2017, 11:02 PM

RE: Knock, knock. - by Knot - 10-26-2017, 01:38 AM

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