Collective Guilt (Me and The Black Cat) EDIT 1.02: Kolemath, A. R., River Notch.

Collective Guilt (Me and The Black Cat) EDIT 1.02: Kolemath, A. R., River Notch.

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11-08-2017, 02:43 PM

Thank you vagabond, I agree the second to last stanza still needs a little modification, still working on it, haven't found it yet. I think maybe for the first stanza i may drop "with purpose" as at first it was "unique with a purpose" but it didn't quite work either. I like this poem... which is why i decided to give it a bump... get something going on it.

Thank you for your thoughts.

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Collective Guilt (Me and The Black Cat) EDIT 1.02: Kolemath, A. R., River Notch. - by QDeathstar - 05-28-2016, 11:21 AM

RE: Me and The Black Cat - by kolemath - 05-29-2016, 01:00 AM

RE: Me and The Black Cat - by Magpie - 05-29-2016, 01:55 AM

RE: Me and The Black Cat - by Joseph Didis - 05-29-2016, 03:40 PM

RE: Me and The Black Cat - by Magpie - 05-29-2016, 06:19 PM

RE: Me and The Black Cat - by Achebe - 05-29-2016, 09:36 PM

RE: Me and The Black Cat - by QDeathstar - 05-29-2016, 10:28 PM

RE: Me and The Black Cat - by Achebe - 05-30-2016, 09:49 AM

RE: Me and The Black Cat - by 71degrees - 05-31-2016, 07:21 AM

RE: Me and The Black Cat - by billy - 05-31-2016, 02:10 PM