11-09-2017, 10:52 AM
Ha, I love this! The narrator so nonchalant about the demon showing up. The demon criticizing the narrator's technique like it's his pet peeve or something. The narrator sassing back to the demon like there's not a demon from hell just standing there waiting. And the demon being all befuddled and speechless about the whole thing. It reminds me of this book of "Grandfather Tales" I have where half the stories are about "How John beat the devil" or some variant of that where the devil shows up and gets his ass handed to him by some cool as a cucumber dude. 
I noticed that you have the music note symbol up in the corner ... and this would be perfect set to the right tune, (maybe Jonny Cash or Willie Nelson style)? Is there already music for it?
I noticed that you have the music note symbol up in the corner ... and this would be perfect set to the right tune, (maybe Jonny Cash or Willie Nelson style)? Is there already music for it?
The Soufflé isn’t the soufflé; the soufflé is the recipe. --Clara