11-13-2017, 02:16 AM
Hi all,
I'm going by the name Persadia in this forum, because I like it.
I have written 3 poems that I know of, in my life. The last 2 I wrote on the same day and decided I wanted to post them in a place where I can get some valuable, candid feedback. I also would like to learn more about poetry and want to explore writing more of it.
I like the rule about giving feedback, and feel this will help givers and receivers become better writers of it (poetry and feedback).
Persadia
"Everything's a metaphor"
"People don't know what to do with you if you are not trying to assimilate." Gabrielle Union
I'm going by the name Persadia in this forum, because I like it.
I have written 3 poems that I know of, in my life. The last 2 I wrote on the same day and decided I wanted to post them in a place where I can get some valuable, candid feedback. I also would like to learn more about poetry and want to explore writing more of it.
I like the rule about giving feedback, and feel this will help givers and receivers become better writers of it (poetry and feedback).
Persadia
"Everything's a metaphor"
"People don't know what to do with you if you are not trying to assimilate." Gabrielle Union
Everything's a metaphor
"People don't know what to do with you when you are not trying to assimilate" Gabrielle Union
"People don't know what to do with you when you are not trying to assimilate" Gabrielle Union

