Off Boardwalk

[vagabond]

like this poem, short but contentful.
i stumbled over wave vomit.
could be my limited grammar but maybe "waves of vomit/ moulding on the haggard shore" would be better?
then tried another way to read it and wanted it to be "waves vomit, / moulding on the haggard shore".
maybe a word less drastic than "waves" would be fine, but i can´t come up with anything.

i saw a homeless person in your poem. the last line hits with social criticism. i keep thinking of the vomit how it could also not be the bum´s but that of the people still walking the boardwalk