11-24-2017, 03:50 AM
(11-20-2017, 07:27 AM)Wjames Wrote: Cracked soles in wet sandI like the contrast of wealth and poverty, I also like the foam being wave vomit. I wanted to read 'of a wine bottle' or of wine bottles' I also read it with a comma after shore.
pebbled with twigs and shards
of wine bottle, wave vomit
moulding on the haggard shore
two hundred meters down
from paradise.
Make me think, I enjoyed the read. Thanks Keith
If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out

