Third Edit: strange goodbye/long goodbye

[Richard]

Third Edit:

long goodbye

darkness watches
a light left on
last night

windows frosted
door closed
only the wind knocks

snow silent as loneliness


Second Edit:

long goodbye

darkness watches
a light left on for friends
gone last night

windows frosted
door closed once more
only the wind will knock

snow silent as loneliness

First Edit:

a light left on for someone
who'll never arrive
windows frosted
door about to close
only the wind knocks
darkness watches
snow silent as loneliness


Original:

a light left on for someone
who'll never arrive
door open
windows frosted
only the wind knocks
darkness watches
hopes to be invited in
snow silent as loneliness

i blame myself
for being such a lackluster friend