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Third Edit: strange goodbye/long goodbye

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11-30-2017, 12:42 PM

Hey all,
I changed the title and played around with the structure a bit. Feel free to let me know if it's an improvement.

Thanks in advance,
Richard

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Third Edit: strange goodbye/long goodbye - by Richard - 11-27-2017, 12:49 PM

RE: strange goodbye - by Todd - 11-27-2017, 01:52 PM

RE: strange goodbye - by Richard - 11-27-2017, 02:36 PM

RE: strange goodbye - by Achebe - 11-27-2017, 03:46 PM

RE: First Edit: strange goodbye - by Richard - 11-27-2017, 10:16 PM

RE: First Edit: strange goodbye - by Knot - 11-27-2017, 10:45 PM

RE: First Edit: strange goodbye - by nibbed - 11-28-2017, 07:39 AM

RE: First Edit: strange goodbye - by Richard - 11-28-2017, 11:48 AM

RE: Second Edit: strange goodbye/long goodbye - by Richard - 11-30-2017, 12:42 PM

RE: Second Edit: strange goodbye/long goodbye - by Knot - 12-01-2017, 02:25 AM

RE: Second Edit: strange goodbye/long goodbye - by vagabond - 12-01-2017, 02:55 AM

RE: Second Edit: strange goodbye/long goodbye - by Richard - 12-01-2017, 11:53 AM

RE: Third Edit: strange goodbye/long goodbye - by Richard - 12-03-2017, 04:59 AM

RE: Third Edit: strange goodbye/long goodbye - by Knot - 12-04-2017, 01:03 AM

RE: Third Edit: strange goodbye/long goodbye - by Richard - 12-11-2017, 01:48 PM

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