Grey

[Linda]

I enjoyed this, I like the tone and mood that you have captured, I will play with this a bit if you don;t mind


As time falls .............................Time falls slowly......omit so slowly
so slowly
and snow outside 
drifts softly,
I sit with you- .......................I sit with you in quiet
so quiet.................................omit
This silence is a riot.
                                            
Awake some early morning,......takes me out of the moment.....maybe, I awake early morning
dull and entranced,
I await the storm .........................awaiting the storm
behind the cold, 
hard glass.

Scattered on the window,
ice has grown 
so life-like.......................instead maybe.....alive in the dim glow
in the dim glow 
of a street light,
cracking as the wind blows.

You gaze in my direction, 
eyes of fire reflection-
I breathe 
on the glass 
watching snow engulf mass.................maybe envelope instead of engulf

Wisps in shadows ..............................Like this stanza as is
from a howling thunder
distant on horizons, 
clash with sudden lightning.

While time
falls slowly
and you stare,
so lonely,
I look away..................................I look away into the grey
Everything is grey.
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                                   Thanks for the read, Linda