Off Boardwalk
#5
it stinks that a beautiful shore can get all mucked up.
it made me wonder if smooth and muted sea glass
really exists, I mean are there places you can go
and find some?

your poem was greatly visual
using so few words. I might fiddle
with enjambment a bit, though

-nibbed
there's always a better reason to love
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Off Boardwalk - by Wjames - 11-20-2017, 07:27 AM
RE: Off Boardwalk - by vagabond - 11-20-2017, 11:35 AM
RE: Off Boardwalk - by Keith - 11-24-2017, 03:50 AM
RE: Off Boardwalk - by RiverNotch - 12-04-2017, 11:41 AM
RE: Off Boardwalk - by nibbed - 12-04-2017, 11:48 AM



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