12-05-2017, 12:07 AM
(12-04-2017, 08:31 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: 1977I love the whistle and how it interrupts that magical time of dusk. While the year may be important because it was a time when parents didn't insist on knowing exactly where their children were at every minute, a time when Be home before dark was enough, I think the poem may be more universal if the title was the N's age at the time.
The streetlights have only just come on
and Father’s summoning whistle
stabs into the park.
I could kiss you quickly
(before it gets dark)
and have an excuse
to turn and run.
Lovely read, thanks.
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