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05-05-2010, 11:43 AM (This post was last modified: 04-24-2013, 11:06 AM by billy.)

the village pond thaws
carp bask open-mouthed
water boatman return

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edited: changed basks to bask after feedback from addy Smile

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Unsuspecting. - by billy - 05-05-2010, 11:43 AM

RE: Unsuspecting by W. Marsland. - by srijantje - 05-05-2010, 12:42 PM

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