12-24-2017, 06:10 PM
Very thought-provoking, which is my eyes what a poem should be, and inasmuch, a very interesting work to read. The formatting is more a distraction to me than help, but this is strictly personal of course, and in any case, it does not take anything away; it is the kind of poem that keeps revealing new thing with each reading, and opening a new line of thought (He deadened my pain by painting a smile... and others); a jewel in its way; a big hat tip...
Huckleberry

