01-09-2018, 04:15 PM
I really enjoyed your delivery in this video, Kaily. It has a bit of a Button Poetry feel to it, and I think it's well chosen considering the audience.
As it stands now it wouldn't work very well just as a written piece, though. It will probably just be a matter of re-formatting a bit. Your premise is good -- it's actually a very sweet poem addressing difference and inequality.
As it stands now it wouldn't work very well just as a written piece, though. It will probably just be a matter of re-formatting a bit. Your premise is good -- it's actually a very sweet poem addressing difference and inequality.
It could be worse